I have been going over my latest NaNo project after deciding that I will be using that as my first self-published short story. I have set a deadline for the first draft which be the end of February but I have run into a snag. The story is “alright” but it is missing something. I can’t put my finger on it, maybe it is missing more description. I think that is one of my biggest issues is that I tend to overlook detailed descriptions because I am always afraid of being “long winded” and boring the reader. So my writing tends to be fast pace and I’m guessing that isn’t a good thing.
So the question I’ve been grappling with this past week is: What do you do when a story needs more?
What do you add, where can you elaborate? Will it be seen as just filler or will it help the reader?
I know that I should just write and anything that isn’t necessary will be caught during edits, but it’s something that I worry about and therefore it is something I get hung up on and can’t move past.
I fear that getting hung up on this is going to derail my goals.
Sorry this post isn’t something more informative, it is just a little rant that I needed to get off my chest.